*Cries* Stupid computer dc'ed me and I lost my entry! Well, here it goes again!

[evila_elf]

Last week I made a bid on ebay. Today I found out I won it. Guess what? I was 'Everyone Says I love you'!!! Ahhhhh!!! Well, it was only a penny (plus 3.99 shipping) lol!

Didn't get a chance to watch all the 4 eps I taped of MASH today. Gonna watch 'Dreams' in the morning. I remember seeing that ep. before and it creeped me out.

I have decided to post a small part of my 'you' ficcy! I was thinking of calling it "the Last Goodbye," but not sure if I can work that into the story or not (enough so that I could name it that) I will post in on ff.net when I have an ending in sight for it--might be awile, so far the ending is only a smallish blur on the horizon.

I think I have some problems with tense, but I am too lazy to stress over it, so get use to it! :P

It is over. The war is over...IT’S OVER!!

Isn’t this what you wanted for what seemed like decades? Now that the time has come, you feel numb, you just can’t believe it!

The tents were cleaned out and torn down. Only skeletons of tents remained standing, like tall markers for a graveyard. MASH 4077 had disbanded, it’s ‘citizens’ scattered; except for you and a select few who stayed to see it packed and torn to the ground. You blink, thinking that with a pass of your eyelids everything would be restored to it’s former glory, it’s former mess…home.

Margaret, Charles, BJ, The Padre, Klinger, Potter, Radar, Trapper, Henry, and even Frank you miss…even the ones who left early, or before their time. BJ. He left just yesterday. Back to his family that he spent a whole lot of time missing.
You take one last look around the camp before clambering up into a jeep…away from the former MASH station, away from Korea, away from that patch of land and across the ocean known as Asia.

This is our last goodbye
I hate to see the love between us die
But it’s over
Just hear this and then I’ll go
You gave me more to live for
More than you’ll ever know

Home. You watch from the window as the plane lands and you wonder why home looks like the place that is foreign.

Well, hope you enjoy it! Even if you don't, drop me a line!

:-P

Oh, btw, that itch that I said disappeared, well, it reappeared! Now it is on my nose, a few cm from my eye! If I rub it too much my eye will swell up!! *cries*

Comments

[takenhawkeye.livejournal.com]

That's it, I'm envious beyond all envy. I have been dying for Everyone Says I Love You. You have wonderful luck.

The story is quite a nice little piece, and while there are a bit of confusing bits with tense, it's really quite lovely. Wonderful job.

I love the episode "Dreams". I unfortunately missed it while on vacation. It's creepy, but amazing.

Farewell.

[evila-elf.livejournal.com]

Thank-ya :) I have always sucked with tenses, more so with this ficcy, though.