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Thursday, August 26th, 2004 12:50 am
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Well, I decided to open up a blank word doc and see what story idea came to mind. After a few minutes of thinking, this little idea started to beg to be written. Not a smutty fic that I mentioned (like I would ever have the courage to post one!!).


Hawkeye was all set up for a date with the beautiful new nurse, Nurse Elize. He waited for her in a very darkened supply tent. A record player was playing a soft melody in the background. Many times in her short stay had they performed this same “ritual.” The darkness of the room was nice and was their personal signature.

Trapper headed to the supply tent to inform Hawkeye that Angie Elize could not make it, she had taken ill from something resembling food poisoning…or something resembling food had poisoned her. He opened the door and stepped inside. Before he could call out Hawkeye’s name, the deprived *snicker* doctor practically pounced on him. Again Trapper tried to speak, but this time lips were firmly pressed over his own. Reflex made him return the kiss against his better judgement.

A hand was brought up against Trapper’s face. Feeling the stubble, Hawkeye froze. “I hope you are hiding something from me.”

Trapper tried to calculate his odds of running away successfully.

Hawkeye, keeping a firm hold on Trapper’s sleeve, went for the light switch. The sudden light caused them both to squint away from the brightness. “Trapper! What the Hell do you think you were doing??”

“Just doing or was going to do before you did what you just did…Damn, I am starting to sound like Colonel Blake,” he muttered. “Nurse Elize couldn’t make it. We think she has food poisoning.”

Hawkeye wrinkled his nose and tried to get out of his mind how turned on that kiss had made him, and why he wasn’t disappointed that Angie couldn’t make the date. Likewise were Trapper’s thoughts.

“Want some fake champagne to wash your mouth out with?” Hawkeye said into the awkward silence.

“Sure.” A pause. “The nurses were right about you.”

“Huh?”

“You are a great kisser!”

Hawkeye opened his mouth and seemed to forget to shut it.

“You know, if you keep your mouth open much longer your tongue is gonna dry out.”




Ooh, the possibilities of a continuation. I might add some more on to it. Enjoy :)

Date: 2004-08-26 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takenhawkeye.livejournal.com
Oh this is quite nice. Makes me laugh, it does -- I love how Hawkeye takes a bit to realize it's Trapper, and even then it takes facial stubble to happen. And the ending line is just so hilariously cute.

I like this, a lot. Nice job.

Farewell.

Date: 2004-08-26 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evila-elf.livejournal.com
Hehe :) I do need to change a few things, but could think of no good way to phrase it at that time. Maybe if I ever get time to work on it some more...seems like everytime I say that I jynx things and never get time/feel like working on it :-/

Date: 2004-08-28 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takenhawkeye.livejournal.com
I just noticed what song you have listed on this -- I love that song, completely. The reason? It has my name in it (or close enough -- wrong spelling).

Yes, I am vain. And yes, that song is about me.

Farewell.

Date: 2004-08-28 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evila-elf.livejournal.com
lol! :P
Had to go back to see what song I listed :P

Date: 2004-08-26 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hawkeyesmartini.livejournal.com
Ha!

Great!

O, continue! Hee hee, that was great.

<:3D~

Date: 2004-08-26 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evila-elf.livejournal.com
Thx muchly :)

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