Kevin thinks it’s so much better to see a flush spreading from cheek to chest, eyelashes quivering when touched just right, the trail of hair to the promised land...
I love this sentence mostly because I generally prefer when actions and feelings are implied than described.
I have a question, though.
He grabs a corner of the bedspread and rolls on top of Kevin, successfully burritoing them in it.
Did you mean "burrowing" or it is an image and I just completely missed it and ruined its effect by asking you about it? In which case, all my apologies.
Great story, great writing, hope to read more from you soon. ;)
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Date: 2008-05-22 04:33 pm (UTC)I have a question, though.
Did you mean "burrowing" or it is an image and I just completely missed it and ruined its effect by asking you about it? In which case, all my apologies.
Great story, great writing, hope to read more from you soon. ;)